I didn't find that confusing, it was excellent work, yet another fav's story

quite true excellent poem... id like fake city tho as a title & i dunno with writers block just anything going on around you...

I really like this poem and it's honesty. It seems really dark (which, as an angsty poem, it is) and brooding.

For other poetry, don't think about what you want to write, just write whatever your heart is saying. Sometimes, when I'm feeling a particularly strong emotion, I'm bursting with words, and voila, a poem.

Faith