 Venus Immortelle 2007-04-09 . chapter 1omfg i love this. i'm adding you to my favorites |
 bigbaddaboom 2005-06-14 . chapter 1That was highly upsetting.
*cries*
I LOVED IT!
it was so sad and beautiful! |
 Ithilpharaz 2004-07-05 . chapter 1 OMG. I haven't been able to get on at all for a long time and this just reminds me of what I'm missing. I love it so much! sigh. the end's so tearful. |
 Influenza 2004-03-28 . chapter 1Nice Job, oh and this is my official apology for not reviewing your stories before now, i am sorry. Now it is spring break and I wll try to get through all of them. This is a good story. The only thing that was kind of weird was how you wrote out of first person from two different perspectives. It worked very well for this story, but anything longer or with more then two characters would get annoying just to warn you. They are btoh very good characters although perhaps developing the past of Tonin a bit would be helpful. Perhaps when they are talking to each other. when Aethe can still not walk. Also, cool title. Last bit of nitpicking there is a part that sayd IL when it should just be I. Overall, interesting story, wonderful descriptions and good characters. |
 Elinore 2003-10-16 . chapter 1dearest, you know who i am. I shall vent now...three...two...one...ARGHH.
Thank you. I have already told you what i think of this story, and i doubt your nose shall forget for some time. Anyway, my typing skills have deteriorated to such an abominable level now tthat it isn't worth the effort. |
 goopygoop 2003-10-08 . chapter 1I remember this story! It was good...but the ending seems different. Am I going crazy? It's like it was changed...but now I think it might not have. ARGH I'M LOSING MY MIND
Sorry. I had a moment. This is such a sad but pretty story. Forbidden love...*swoon* |
 Lady Laiered 2003-09-21 . chapter 1*sniff*
You've already heard my opinion on this story, but I'll rewrite it here in case you've forgotten.
This is a great concept that was turned into a wonderful story with an amazing end. The end tears at yor heart. Very touching, and realistic without sacrificing the overall air of a more romantic time.
More good stories, please! ASAP! |