hola. yeah, i hear you here as well. i like the way this one flows,it seems to have more of a beat than your others. not that it makes this one better in anyway ^^ i think what i really love about your poems is your ability to write in such a way that a large gathering of people can identify with you.

I liked this. Very sweet. There's a person that I feel this way about, too, and so I can identify with it. ^_^!