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J00ly
2006-06-19
ch 1,
abuseOh my God. I cried after I finished this. This was absolutely beautiful.

I did notice a few minor spelling errors, but they didn't distract me from the story. Oh, goodness, I need to blow my nose...that was just beautiful. I loved it.
TaigaSama
2005-09-29
ch 1,
abuseNYO! You really seem to get into the minds of your characters even if it's just enough to tell what you're looking to tell. This and "I Like You" both have an impressive dreamy quality that seems to bring everything together even though the endings are abrupt. The only thing I can comment on is that this doesn't flow as well I think it might in certain places but be aware that a lesser writer told you that.~~TaigaSama
Elizabeth Szorcsik
2005-04-16
ch 1,
abuse"After the funeral, we wet to a restaurant to “remember his life,” as my son-in-law put it. I never knew you remembered someone by getting drunk of your ** and singing karaoke. Young people these days."

You spelt went, wet.

Besides that, I didn't see anything to change. This turned out well so far, keep it up.
Alix Blair
2005-03-30
ch 1,
abuseMein Gott, that was absolutely wonderful! I didn't think I was going to like it, I persoanlly am a fan of the young, angsty boys (sometimes...but that's not my fault, I blame hormones lol) but I really must say it was fantastic! Beautifully written, really sweet, and the narrator was awesome! Definantly getting added to my favorites ^_^
djana
2005-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abusenice story. i like how you wrote the point of view of the old man. good ending.
EvaUnkown
2004-12-08
ch 1,
abusehi nice story i need ur help how the Heck do you make a story what does selact a document you have uploaded previously mean and do you do that my email address is MyBuBBlish435@aol.com thanx
RedHandedLillian
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseOh wow that was an excellent one shot. I mean excellent. Beautifully written. And i love how the old man was so funny and sarcastic and witty. It really was great.
Comawhite13
2004-06-24
ch 1,
abuseIt's really good. I know exactly what it is like to be a lesbian in a highschool situation so I can only hope my (possible) children will not put me in a home. I am happy you were sensitive to themes that really needed sensitivity. Write more and I'll read :D
princess17
2004-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abusenice sentimental touch. u should be proud.
um...what?
2004-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseReally, so cute. I really liked the originality, and the way you made it really sound like an elderly man was so fuuny. Keep up the work! Love it.
Agathy
2004-01-30
ch 1,
abuseGreat one-shot story. I'm glad your writing involves homosexuals...a lot of people characterize them as overly-effeminate and exotic in their stories. nice work!
Forest Passant
2004-01-25
ch 1,
abusethis was excellent. very meaningful.
Lady Kickass
2004-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Interesting and not run-of-the-mill. You've got talent, so keep writing.
Liebe Sasa
2004-01-01
ch 1,
abuseOOh! ~clapclaps~ I quite liked it. I agree, there are quite a few stories out there about high school or college aged gays, and not too many about the older folks. Then again, even in the heterosexual world there aren't too many stories about old folks, at least in comparison. Anyhow, I quite enjoyed your piece. ^^ I think I'll go look into your other works.
~Sasa
Minnie Souris
2003-10-18
ch 1,
abuseOh how right you are to be proud of this. Its so good to read a story of true love, without sex and without angst but showing that love can live on after youth has gone. I truly love this piece, would you mind if I download and print it, its a piece I would like to keep

Mary
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