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| The Voluptuous Innocent 2007-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseI absolutely love the line "you make my hormones wonder". I think I giggled for a good five minutes. Poor guy, being so shy... I can relate. You are certainly a master of repetition! I won't be forgetting the name "Dahlia" any time soon! |
| Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseexcellent work! |
| R.W. Zeppler 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a different poem and one I like. Very nicely written! Great job! |
| Jimmy Jazz 2003-12-31 ch 1, | abuselol, very good, I like it. |
| not sure yet 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abusehahaha, very cute, like it, nicely done |