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| ancient trees 2004-02-26 ch 1,  | abusejeez... sounds like REAL a nice guy... Why did he go out with you in the first place? Poetry wise, this didn't sound like a poem twords the end... more like just a rant...but that's okay! That's what poetry is for! The beginning was nice, I liked some of your lines, very creative! 'You're not Simon, and I don't do what your mouth says'- I love that! It was awesome, best line in the whole damn thing! (I mean damn in a good way...heh heh) Score with this poem! -Amberose |
| Pissed-AN-Confused 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseDont say your crap cuz ur not *hugs* Anyway i really loved ur poem And the guy sounds like a real ** but thats just my oppinion anyway great write and please keep writing! ~Emmy P.S~ My other scren name ElizabethMary wont let me in so this is my new account just a lil FYI anyway im sorry about ur boyfriend and if u need to vent or complane e-mail me and i will listen... |