jeez... sounds like REAL a nice guy...
Why did he go out with you in the first place?
Poetry wise, this didn't sound like a poem twords the end... more like just a rant...but that's okay! That's what poetry is for! The beginning was nice, I liked some of your lines, very creative!
'You're not Simon, and I don't do what your mouth says'- I love that! It was awesome, best line in the whole damn thing! (I mean damn in a good way...heh heh)
Score with this poem!
-Amberose

Dont say your crap cuz ur not *hugs*
Anyway i really loved ur poem
And the guy sounds like a real **
but thats just my oppinion anyway great write and please keep writing!
~Emmy

P.S~ My other scren name ElizabethMary wont let me in so this is my new account just a lil FYI anyway im sorry about ur boyfriend and if u need to vent or complane e-mail me and i will listen...