 evm 2004-02-26 . chapter 1jeez... sounds like REAL a nice guy...
Why did he go out with you in the first place?
Poetry wise, this didn't sound like a poem twords the end... more like just a rant...but that's okay! That's what poetry is for! The beginning was nice, I liked some of your lines, very creative!
'You're not Simon, and I don't do what your mouth says'- I love that! It was awesome, best line in the whole damn thing! (I mean damn in a good way...heh heh)
Score with this poem!
-Amberose |