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Kormation 2003-12-04 . chapter 1
That was excellent. You've used some great rhyming, in an abab pattern, except in the last line where it doesn't rhyme, which to me, just made the last stanza stand out more. You've got some great imagery there, 'a laugh of light' and 'a flutter of dreams'. This was a pleasure to read.
-Kormation
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