this story gave me the goosebumps.
i loved it! =)

That was a great story. The way you captured the girl's personality, her life, and her obssession was wonderful.

That was great, although i'm still abi confused about "him" could you post note at the bottom of the story about what your ideas for the grils "love"? Was it someone playying a joke or did she make it up to save her self. The thing about breaking the watch and using the peices to slit her wrists...It's honeslty one of the most capturing and..."entraulling" things i have ever red. Though i think maybe the telling of the idea before it is done somehow makes the actions lose impact, but at the same time without that deceration it would not have been so...
A truely amazinf peice of work, you are a writer i envy and i'll be looking out for your other work.

That was great, although i'm still abi confused about "him" could you post note at the bottom of the story about what your ideas for the grils "love"? Was it someone playying a joke or did she make it up to save her self. The thing about breaking the watch and using the peices to slit her wrists...It's honeslty one of the most capturing and..."entraulling" things i have ever red. Though i think maybe the telling of the idea before it is done somehow makes the actions lose impact, but at the same time without that deceration it would not have been so...
A truely amazinf peice of work, you are a writer i envy and i'll be looking out for your other work.

O.O
That was good but...
O.O
Damn! It's finished! T.T
Sorry to hear about that. I hope you get back on the net soon - I wannt read more of your stuff!

Awesome Chapter. I hope that she makes it though and that you plan on updating this story.

This is excellent! I hope you write more soon!! ^^

o did she miss him, or was there even a morris street?
hm I dunno something doesn't add up...well let me know and update!

I'm totally mesmerized by your story. Please continue.

Oh no it's 1201! I hope that she will be ok. Update soon. This was a really good chapter

Hey, you finally updated!
Great chapter. I love the tension and all her emotions bundling up together. Really nice. Please don't take this long again for the next chapter! ^.^

no! You have to update! You cant leave it like that! This is so good. But i'll kill you if you dont let us know how it ends!

I love the imagery in your writing... The detail of the cigarette was wonderfully written.
*wants to find out what will happen next* :)

This is an awesome story. Hope you update soon.

I don't know why it's taken me so long to get around to reading this! Great chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)