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The Forgotten Maiden 2006-08-06 . chapter 1
The imagery is so pretty...
Topaz Waters 2004-04-19 . chapter 1
Very pretty. Interesting, to think of all that little petal will go through.:-)
Summerdazed 2004-01-24 . chapter 1
another flawless masterpiece!
by the way, I saw something on the Black Rider's summary that Princess Mulan has revealed herself?
=summerdazed=
LancerDragoon 2003-11-08 . chapter 1
Deep...
pippin tomson 2003-10-14 . chapter 1
that conveys a nice image, very peacful with a lot of hope.
eew 2003-10-03 . chapter 1
~Great piece! You have to keep on writing!


c. butterfly~**
Stoffpferd 2003-09-29 . chapter 1
Such a beautiful, heart-warming piece...I truly love your work!

~Stoffpferd~
Neko Tatsutahime 2003-09-27 . chapter 1
Oh..pretty...my haikus suck X_o;
Lidless Eye 2003-09-26 . chapter 1
Once again, the last line speaks out for the rest of the haiku. Wonderfully done, great work!
Miamouse 2003-09-26 . chapter 1
'pawn of destiny'... I love this ending. In a haiku it seems as though every line has to be strong, and it is in this. Lovely.

Mia
BloodBrother 2003-09-25 . chapter 1
Very deep and meaningful (Passenger on time's river is one of your best lines yet) for such a simple subject.
Psycho-kyugurl 2003-09-25 . chapter 1
It's like fantasy blending into reality...! Preeti-ful~~!!
Jess Angel 2003-09-24 . chapter 1
Ah, very nice haiku.

The title was again perfect...I can't stop thinking about how much I like this one. Simplistic, yet so much meaning. The image and feelings are stuck in my head *and* my heart. Guess you know what that means. You don't?...It means this has stolen a spot in my favorites ^_~

Kudos to lovely work. I'll be sure to check out more of it soon. Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
Mime 2003-09-24 . chapter 1
Pretty! I can almost see the petal...*daydreams*
WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-09-24 . chapter 1
That was great! I've been waiting forever for a new update from you!
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