this is so sad and touching. =( but i believe there must be some form of pity in humans ... i dunno.

Normally, I detest any type of fiction that's soul purpose is to make me cry, but this story accomplishes a lot more than that. I think that this teaches a vital lesson to every one of it's readers. You can expect a huge difference in the way that I (And hopefully anyone who read it) behave towards any handicapped person. This is excellently written- Bye!

wow.
powerful and wellwritten.

its hard to believe that the jeering mobs would have the brain power and sensitivity to see a connection between a girl and a butterfly - mobs are usually rather moronic, but you write so well that i'll suspend my doubts :-)