hmm, intersting, this kinda feels like its missing somthing like it was a page out of a book. how about some more background maybe. i like the little boy with the black feather though... and who said black wasnt good, i love that you didnt use white as the good guys, i just thought that was cool. perhaps some discription of god... it kinda left me wondering as to what about god in the end, you must do onto one side as you would do onto anouther... *shudders* evil algibrac rules... but i am serius i want to know about god now.
well done!
Write on!