Hmm, this was a good one. I liked it.

YAY! Optomism! WOW! Sorry, anyways! The poem! I like the 4 stanza, 4 line thingy with it rhyming. That was great! Specially coz the last line has such a different feel to it. The rest of the song rolls round your mouth but the last line is sharp. BAM! Good one =)

- Crucified Sanctity -

That's really good. I like this poem. Keep it up.

ur story would realli make sense if i could read :P keep on writing!!

Aww...this one's pretty, and so hope-filled! Keep writing!

i like this. very short, sweet, straight-forward. :D good job!