Excellent! I thoroughly enjoy your work, you are one of few writers who's writing doesn't seem boring to me. I read pretty much all of your poems, and I must say you should publish some of it. Great fluency, and vocabulary. Beautiful work.


Sincerely,
Lytheria


~If you ever have the time, please stop by and review some of my work sometime, I would be honored. ~

WONDERFUL! SUPERB! BRILLIANT!
hmm, what else can I say?
AMAZING USE OF WORDS, THIS IS JUST BRILLIANT!

Really, it is very beautiful I *LUV* it so much! keep this up and I can tell you're going to go places someday :D

Toodles from Tinsley

i liked i truly did, i dont think i got enough sleep last night to really appreciate the beauty of your poem like i usually can, so i hope you will just accept my high praise of this beautiful piece. my fav line would hvae to be "But the sea remains deeper than the surface" i rea;lly loved what it implied, teh meaning, just swept me away, even in my sleepiness. great work mon ami, kudos!

Wow...Outstanding piece! Keep writing you are very talented!

One word: awesome.


~Heart of the Sword

Lovin the last stanza...nice job, but i still want you to go nuts in a poem one day. Would be entertaining. Pleasey?

extremely vivid detail and nice phrasing... good job!