this looks really good! i would love to read more! i can really relate! ^^X
~*Lyrna*~

Hm... very interesting. I'm guessing you're modeling Aislinn off yourself, for at least a little bit of it? I like the beginning, though.

Very good! update soon! I cannot find anything that needs work. very very good! :D

Very good start. Leaves a lot of options for how the story could blossom. I can't wait to see what happens in the future. It's going to be a great story, I can feel that all ready.