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| Lady B.V Rose 2004-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseHehe sounds very like me! :P - Dai M~H xx (BVR) Hey, ya do remember that this place exists right? In case you've forgotten the addy is: http://w.fictionpress.com |
| cosmo-queen 2004-01-13 ch 1, | abuseLol, I know this feeling. I'm too in love with my food to ever hope to go on a successful diet. Ah well! Keep it up :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Lidless Eye 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL, I like the last line... And you got a good question there, too. =) I work in Fast Food, so I work with them... just a culture that seemed to work here, I guess. |
| Papillons Noirs 2003-09-27 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was funny! Everything comes with fries because everyone loves fries! |
| Keep it 100 2003-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHeh. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Knight of Tarian 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHeehee...funny haiku. Keep up the wonderful work! (See, my poetry teacher would say that's an example of alliteration) |
| Mime 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWhy does everything come with fries, you ask? *ponders* Well...*ponders some more* ...I have no clue. If I had it my way (which of course I don't), I'd have everything come with moon cakes. ^.^ Either those, or basil tea. ^_~ |
| Wasted Postage 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why everything comes with fries, but I don't mind because I just decided that I don't have the willpower to go on a diet. Excellent haiku. ~*~AbunaiChikara |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abusecuz fries are yummy...great haiku |
| Children of the Root 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abusebecause fries are good? I hate diets. Currently, I'm on a no chocolate diet. Been so for about 8 weeks. It sucks. But I had some chocolate the other day because we were doing statistic problems in psychology and we used m&m's so needless to say after eating those I was very hyper for the rest of the day. Anyways, funny haiku! |
| obsidian katana 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuselol, cute. i like this. and i like fries, but yeah, they really are fat and greasy. nice job. |
| Deadwind 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseAH DON'T REMIND ME OF CAKE AND FRIES! Even though you may be off your diet I'm still on mine! :P |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseSo true! lol. And why *does* everything come with fries? ~lyv |
| Miz E. Mak 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseDiets are unhealthy. Fries are great. Chocolate cakes are nice too. I'd say to throw out that crazy diet plan and chow down!! good haiku, write on!! |
| SweetGrape 2003-09-23 ch 1, | abuseHa! Cute:) |