kind of sad...makes me want to meow. (meow) this is a very nice poem, very well written. you've done the world of poetry (and your idea) justice.

ehy, i like this one a lot, its so sad... abnd it dos remind me of somethign that would happen in LOTR, lol. evanescence again? whisper right... well itsa very good! love and good luck. Twilight

That was... AWSOME, whoa. It's kinda like something from Lord of the Rings and the begining except way better. It's really good.