lol kool. i liked the idea of the spiritual forms, but thats probably because i used the same exact thing in my story. newhoz, good job.

OOh. Femslash.
I liked this a lot. ^.^

Very nice. :)

-The Dark Enchantress and The Light Enchantress

I skimmed story and picked up a couple words: hair, arsonal, eliminated

As I said in the comment in your Ujournal- Femslashiness! Woot!

Heh. ^__^ Was very pretty.

Yum, fluffy f/f goodness... :is pleased: Reading this has made me almost late for my meeting, Lira-chan. :trys to frown, then gives up: Nice job indeed. Although I kept finding myself wondering what the reactions of all those fire elementals was... I mean, they could see all that, could they not? Or did I just miss something... :ponders:
Well, yes. Good ficlet. :nods:

But, one sentence did bother me a tad bit. It's the "as a" part of it, I think. It simply doesn't sound right to me, that's all.

"Kiriwaru unlocked her knees, stumbling back, embarrassed as a goddess to be caught off-guard like that."

Other than that... No further complaints! Write more f/f, ne? :begs: I'll need another quick, yet good, f/f fix again, y'know.