Reviews for Divine Matters - FictionPress.com

empty-spiral 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuselol kool. i liked the idea of the spiritual forms, but thats probably because i used the same exact thing in my story. newhoz, good job.
Jenny 2004-01-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseOOh. Femslash. I liked this a lot. ^.^
Amania Miller 2003-09-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery nice. :) -The Dark Enchantress and The Light Enchantress
Posi 2003-09-24 ch 1,	abuseI skimmed story and picked up a couple words: hair, arsonal, eliminated
Karasu Tendo 2003-09-23 ch 1,	abuseAs I said in the comment in your Ujournal- Femslashiness! Woot! Heh. ^__^ Was very pretty.
Shadow 3013 2003-09-23 ch 1,	abuseYum, fluffy f/f goodness... :is pleased: Reading this has made me almost late for my meeting, Lira-chan. :trys to frown, then gives up: Nice job indeed. Although I kept finding myself wondering what the reactions of all those fire elementals was... I mean, they could see all that, could they not? Or did I just miss something... :ponders: Well, yes. Good ficlet. :nods: But, one sentence did bother me a tad bit. It's the "as a" part of it, I think. It simply doesn't sound right to me, that's all. "Kiriwaru unlocked her knees, stumbling back, embarrassed as a goddess to be caught off-guard like that." Other than that... No further complaints! Write more f/f, ne? :begs: I'll need another quick, yet good, f/f fix again, y'know.