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| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-25 ch 40, | abuseTruthfully, I liked the first Dive Pixie more because this one seemed like a lot of unneeded drama but the way you wrote it was really good. You babbled a bit when the characters started thinking to themselves but besides that, I really liked reading more about the Nancy Boy Family :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseYay sequels! :D |
| PrincessNancy 2008-04-30 ch 40, | abuseOMG. what a way to end the story!! What's voyeur! HILARIOUS! Completely hilarious ride, it was, reading the Diva Pixie stories! Thanks for writing sucha wonderful piece! |
| Lilchany 2008-04-23 ch 40, | abuseI love your story,its really really good but even if you dont write diva pixie number 3 please at least write an epilogue, i would really like to know what happens after the wedding and if they do really get kids. Btw i think your a great writer so keep up the good work/stories. :) |
| Singing for Absolution 2008-04-10 ch 40, | abuseI'm still grinning, but I kind of wonder who got to be the bride, you know? I really (pretend that's bolded) loved these two stories. :) Cheers! |
| Giggles4evr 2008-02-15 ch 17, | abuseI don't know who Blair is, but I hate the president of my country. He (Bush) got more electoral votes, but lost the popular vote. I think he shouldn't be in office, but unfortunately I don't have a choice (yet). The story is pretty good, but there are a few gramatical mistakes. |
| YoungInside 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE BRANDON! He's so adowubble! Erm.. there's one part in this story.. I have no idea where, sorry.. but where someone says I'm on a role.. it should be I;m on a roll. But fantastic job, by the way. I'm gonna go ahead and read Hello Kitty soon. This is really a fun story to read.. i think you handled the drama really well. it managed to seem light hearted and happy although it was dealing with such touchy issues. The emotions were played well but if you ever want to go back to the world of Nancy Boy, I suggest a slight rewrite for the second one. See, the emotions were played out well enough but it the readers can't get really into it. But I really like this anyhow. Great job with it. (: |
| midnightbeauty 2007-11-29 ch 31, | abuseHahaha you live here? Cool :D So, I usually don't review already completed stories...but I had to in this case!! I've abosolutely loved this story and the first one :) Great writing :P keep it up! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| anne1822 2006-12-28 ch 11, | abuselol funny stuff i can't wait to finish reading it. |
| SkateForLife 2006-12-16 ch 40, | abuseSo I just reviewed the first story and I must say, this story definitely was a satisfactory sequel! I loved it. Good job! |
| Alenor 2006-10-28 ch 40, | abuseLOL! kids just love the awkward questions don't they? this was a fabulous story, i think i'm gonna miss the nancy boy crew but this was a good place to stop now that everything has been resolved. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2006-10-21 ch 40, | abuseaw. that was totally awesome. i didn't read number two until now because i had like a year of homework and assignments, but its an extra cute story i love every single bit of it. and hello kitty is also a favourite of mine =] happy writing izzie |
| NOTPOSTING 2006-03-09 ch 40, | abuseI absolutely LOVED it. Especially the little bit about the future baby...I'd like a little story on how Brandon is with his own children...it would be interesting to say the least. Keep writing!! |
| Lightning Storm 2006-02-21 ch 40, | abuseI loved this story so much. It was full of laughs and tears. I'm gonna miss that Diva Pixie, lol. |
| lee's blackrose 2005-08-24 ch 40, | abuseNicely written. I liked the ending. I think I preferred 'Diva Pixie 1', but this one tied up a few ends (the trust issue, in particular), that you obviously left open in the last one. Very good. |