oh wow, I really like this! It's sorta creepy and bizarre... and it makes you think alot! Good job, it's really an amazing piece of work ^_^.

it was...interesting.although, i was confused on how she died.

Good jobbie!! Although, I wouldn't say this story is creepy. It was more... Strangely sweet?

Good job.

Ice

Little freaky there. Can you tell me how you got words to become italized?? (I'm dying over here trying to figure it out) Though the story was nice and freaky.

Nice job Fant! I loved the description as Laur was heading home, and when she saw the boy in the tree. I personally don't find this tale to be that creepy, maybe it was because there was not enough mention of ghostboy, nothing creepy at least, though I enjoyed the part about the flute and the odd tune. Laur's death at the end was a nice twist, especially her appearing in the crowd. (sorry to anyone reading this if i just gave away the ending!) -Kezhound