Hey Chibi, this is Neko,

Good story. A few grammar flukes, but I guess those were typoes (such as the ones found in Age of the Unknown).

Went a little fast, but it's good. I like it.

hey, I like your story I thought it was really cool. Nice description and everything! When you get a chance please R&R my story "Expensive Bounty"

Thanks!
-NoMercy