I liked that as well. Perfection in simplicity.

i could pratically worship your poems! (but i'm not going to!)

capture

Oh, thanks for reviewing so much *facepalms* I think poems are not much of my strong point though... I have no idea how you can write haikus so well! I mean they're just one liners but it seems so ... real... and so descriptive. I can't write short poems! But I can write songs decently. Especially my newest one 'One Day'. Maybe that's not the best title... hmm...

Anyways, I just want to say I love your poems! I've read nearly all of them already!

I've been seeing many dragonflies lately, so I can really picture this. Great work.

Heart of the Sword

Short, sweet, and effective.

I like it. Usually I don't care for poems only a few lines long, but yours (for some reason) was one I liked.

Great flow for the little thing too.

Good job.

Cheers.

nice! i like the first line.

i love dragonflies... good description of them!

Hi,

I love to watch dragonfiles fly around the pond. Its nice to see their colours shimmer in the sunlight. I liked how you capurted this! Please Read and Review my poems and tell me what you think.

Thanks for sharing :)

very nice imagery here. I love the "metallic colours" description you used. That is awesome. Very good job on this.

write on!

Wow! I really love this one! :)

Keep writing,

Naomi

Wow, really cool. I love the first line. :)