beautiful, i especially liked the second line of each stanza, it really brought out the true meaning of a physical gesture, truly lovely. kudos

Impressive. I respect someone who can make the art of rhythm expound deeper than just rhyme. And be heart-felt.

Wow, I feel, loved. For those of you who think it's not possible, you're wrong. I love you too!

Sweetness. I liked this. The ending lines especially. Good stuff.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

Oh Ty, this is your best one. Flying-Buttress is so good for you and you are so good for him. I know that he makes you happy because your poems are happy. This is your best one yet.