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| cosmo-queen 2004-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseShort and simple but it sums up the music of the beach well. I shall listen out for the Beach Song next time I'm there ;) Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Emi Amara 2003-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHi! This is really nice poem, very good imagery! Keep writing more! Cya =) *WG |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-11-01 ch 1, | abuse*Sigh* Kinda romantic...It gives off such a peaceful image... - BVR xx |
| Mime 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuse*immediately teleports herself to the beach after reading CoolBean's poem* *listens to the Beach Song and grins* |
| Lidless Eye 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseVery well-described! I like it a lot... good work. |
| obsidian katana 2003-09-27 ch 1, | abusewonderful piece! well written, so sweet, you painted a lovely, peaceful picture in my mind good job. keep on writing! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-26 ch 1, | abusecute^^ gonna get a tan? or BBQ? Beach Song? More like seagull screams. Haha, nice and i likes. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is neat--the rhythm works well, and the little scene it describes is very cute. I haven't heard of this format before--did you invent it, or did someone else? Either way, I like it. Maybe I'll write one later if I have time. ~lyv |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abusewow that was really neat...what is this format called? i really like it! |
| Wasted Postage 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis painted a beautiful picture! I loved it! Excellent job! ~*~AbunaiChikara |