|Reviews for My hand aches from writing so|
| Just Wolf 3/29/04 . chapter 1
it's sort of funny, i think. the begining is very enjoyable to read, and funny. I liked 2though it burns to write / i feel nothing." so tryw. i thought the ending got a little off track, though. such as "burn thyslef with flames from hell," it seemed cliched, and a little big of an idea to be expresing in a short poem., and wods like t'is and thyself are a bit oldfashioned for a poem that is dealing with very modern ideas. overall, though, it wasn't half bad.
thanks for the emails. my name's rozzy.