heehee, the squirrl and the cheese. Very origanal ^_~

lol! that was so cute!! ^.^ good job!

KAWAII!! So cute, write more because your good. ^_^

I'm glad the squirrel didn't get hurt...During reading I was thinking, "aww poor squirrel! don't get caught in the trap!" Did this really happen? if it did good job narrorating it, if it didn't good job making it up! I really liked it and I'm so glad the squirrel was unharmed, and I liked the parenthesis stuff you put at the end of each stanza!

and could you review something of mine if you have any time?

~Shelila~