As before, you do not have any trace of a meter. do you know what meter is? It's the pattern of emphasis on the sylables in the lines of your poem. It makes it easier to read and understand.
I don;t use it much either, because when I'm grumpy enough to write poetry, I don't often stop to check my rhythm.
-l.c.

Hello, finally reviewing...

The subject caught my interest, I think everyone is victim to confused signs from the people they like. They see what they want to see and then say "wait, did they really do that?" so you question them the next time.

I liked the chorus, but when it came to the verses you weren't very clear, it just seemed you were speaking or trying to write down words, I didn't get the feeling of it. It didn't seem to flow together.

hello! why do we both like guys that confuse us? Oh well, maybe all guys do. I really like the way you wrote it just sounds cool. why is m/j blind? oh well, i guess we'll find out sumtime...i want him to reply to me or kk! i sent him another email. wat if he like got a new email and never checks that one and thats why? who knows. And who speaks braille better, m/j or pidge?

Reli

Wow! great poem, you did a realy nice job narrating it. The refrain was especially catchy. Wonderful Job!

Polgara Wolfe