Congrats! on another book finished. I still wish that you'd describe the characters more, but i guess not describing very much can add to the imagination of the reader. You do very well with adding in relevent twists and turns. Great story plot. Can't wait to read the next book.

Sigh. I miss having the time to read your incredible stories. At least I have some time today to catch up.

Helian, will be okay, right? I mean, what about her young?

I can't believe Norianna is gone... I didn't realize it unitl now, but she was one of my favorite characters.

The fact that you can bring out so much emotion from your readers is just more proof about what a talented writer you are. Never stop! I truly believe you could be published some day.

Yay! On to book 5!

Norianna is dead. I think I am going to go cry now.

Well there you go... one moer story in the pentad and you manage to get my favorite charicters (save Nightstone and Kymenos)... Good show. I'm really going to miss Norianna and Shadow... It all most too sad... Shows just how good you are... i don't get attached that easily but you really brought me down with those.

From your fan,
-Himitsu the Hunter

dang, i fall behind for a few days and now its over, oh well i still got to read it.

thankes for another great story.
later the, MAD-MAN

Sniff. Getting close to the end of another story. It's a little depressing, your stories are so great I don't want them to end. Promise me you'll never stop writing, okay? And get these things published!

I forgot.. is Luden going to help Rior, since Shadow died?

If Kymenos or the members of theStar Circle are using their powers improperly, wouldn't the Cycle take their powers from them, like Klessa of the Nine Wonders? And please don't kill off Sykeen...You've already killed off Shadow, Alliana,and almost Lyli-the-real and Pnneral...is Ternora really going to be Queen?Or is it just part of a plan to kill Pyeros and Blieranna?

This sword-dream reminds me somewhat of the one myth about the guy who traded places with the king for a day and found that there was a sword hanging by a thin thread over his head and got really scared, and told the king, and found out that the king had to live in constant fear of danger everyday. Or something like that.

Cool.

Nightstone: Good Queen
Silar: Good Queen -- but in the dream, didn't Elary scold Mitherill? And didn't Mitherill die?
Olumer: Finally let go of human life
Ternora: Stranger person. Greater Plan?

A. Lee

Go Rior!

Ternora as queen? Don't like that much. Or Kymenos as an heir, for that matter, but at least Norianna might stop her 'hm'ing now.

I'm happy for Olumer.

Poor, poor Elary.

Shara needs to grow up. Really. I used to like her.

Awesome writing, keep it up!

OMG. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was the funniest thing ever!! I loved it. I was literally laughing out loud. Such a fitting end. Splat goes to the beatle :) I'm getting slightly sad that the end is approaching. But I'm sure you'll continue with something else, right?!? I'm sure its not easy to produce something so ... excellent.. so rapidly, and I admire you so much for the work you've done. Anyway, man, that was great! I'm glad the prophecy is borken now, once and for all. Though I suppose, it was technically done for in Nightstone's last chapter. Ah, but this puts a certain emphasis on it. A quite hilarious emphasis. Ciao!!

OMG. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was the funniest thing ever!! I loved it. I was literally laughing out loud. Such a fitting end. Splat goes to the beatle :) I'm getting slightly sad that the end is approaching. But I'm sure you'll continue with something else, right?!? I'm sure its not easy to produce something so ... excellent.. so rapidly, and I admire you so much for the work you've done. Anyway, man, that was great! I'm glad the prophecy is borken now, once and for all. Though I suppose, it was technically done for in Nightstone's last chapter. Ah, but this puts a certain emphasis on it. A quite hilarious emphasis. Ciao!!

You know, I really do think Kymenos would make a good King of Dalzna if I didn't already know that:

1.) he would make a very bad King of Dalzna, and

2.) Dalzna doesn't need a king.

OMG, (oh my god, I wrote omg--now I feel incredibly stupid and ditzy) Ternora just up and made herself Queen?

I know some people who are going to have problems with that.

A. Lee

STupid Goddess. Ishella i mean.
Rina Riku