You make it sound like every children in the world is just as pathetic as you are. Don't degrade them to your level, I'm pretty sure they can speak for themselves rather than have you whine and complain about how unfair authority is. I've known some pretty messed up kids, but none of them were never akin to "Oh! See our pain and not our frowns! Oh! Our bleeding hearts and agonizing tears of crimson blood! Spread our wings and let us go because we're SO smart and MATURE to the extent where we can write CRAPPY POETRY." Can you SENSE the SARCASM in my VOICE NOW?
Take off, imbecile.
Quille

It's like all the crappy angst in the world decided to move to one web address and hold a poetry slam.

WRIT MORE PLZ WITH BELLDANDY KEYCHAINS ON TOP

-The Scarred Puppet Formerly Known As Ulyaoth

nice poem - i really like that last stanza there.

Hm. I like this. I really do. Deep look into the pain all people feel.

Keep writing.

Jess 0:o)

Nice.

I like how at the end you use contracdictor terms so well. Makes for a great ending.

Great imagery as well.

Cheers.