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Reviews For: It Isn't Easy Being Blue (Act 1)

John Westcott
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseIf I read this post right, you originally posted this work in the year 20? Man, you are so overdue for an update if that's the case. ;)

My only real complaint is with the formatting of this chapter. The indentations and lines of asterisks distract my feeble brain.

I'd definitely like to see more of this work. The opening is intriguing but the kind of thing where you want to turn to the next page... only there's no next page. Whatever you have planned here sounds like it could make a first rate novel but I'd have to see more before I made a real judgement. As a setup it's quite excellent and well written. But it desperately needs following up.

Get to it!

JW
anonymous
2003-06-24
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a really good story.

2001-03-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseCome on, now....finish your original fic...or is dis the end? (sigh) I wish you would finish the Mathilda's one...(Professional)
victoria lubomski
2000-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseum... well i see that you should avoid listening to portishead unless you're writing- no but, i like this start with the character of sam. oh so evily (yeah i know that's not a word!) mysterious! are you going to go any further with this character or what?
Denise Willis
2000-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse I was intrigued by this...I would have liked to see more though..pretty good read...Deexxx
Jonathan Urban
2000-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse Excellent piece, looking forward to the next one!
Aurora
2000-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse totally cool
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