I like it,
It wasn't what I expected at first. But it was expressive, and soft in it's anger. I think it is slightly passive agressive... well at any rate I'm a fan.
S.c.

Weird, but cool. And very good.

Wow, I can really see...feel your emotions in this. You expressed them very well. I like. Good stuff.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

This is sad and emotive but easily understood. Good use of words