|Reviews for Thai Temple|
| philoslove 3/6/05 . chapter 1
Lovely! I didn't really agree with the 'bursting' word though. It's too... it doesn't fit the mood, the atmosphere, the serenity, somehow, though knowledge isn't a physical form.
I thought 'soul' could be the last word as well.
A brilliant piece of work; I love the imagery, and the diction as well. The atmosphere it creates is one of tranquility, where you have achieved the right effect. Lovely! Brilliant...
| mmoonsshiner 3/2/05 . chapter 1
Just beautiful, your work is so sensualy pleasing. Id like to visit Thailand there is so much knowledge in those temples. I wonder which sect was the temple part of ?Nat
| Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon 3/1/05 . chapter 1
Nice! Makes me feel tranquil... and good imagery, btw.
| pippin tomson 10/15/03 . chapter 1
This seems a very simple poem, but it paints a very pleasant, tanquil pictiure.
| mizu no kokoro 10/4/03 . chapter 1
wow, i felt like I was there myself! veri nice!
| Keep it 100 9/26/03 . chapter 1
Very nice and so full of a spiritual hope.
Heart of the Sword
| simpleplan13 9/25/03 . chapter 1
very cool poem... I love the format & the imagery is excellente
| gold against the soul 9/25/03 . chapter 1
I want to go to that temple! :) Very good poem! Thankyou for your review on mine, personally i think it's a bit shit but i do appreciate comments anyway! I like the way this poem hums with strength...