Lovely! I didn't really agree with the 'bursting' word though. It's too... it doesn't fit the mood, the atmosphere, the serenity, somehow, though knowledge isn't a physical form.

I thought 'soul' could be the last word as well.

A brilliant piece of work; I love the imagery, and the diction as well. The atmosphere it creates is one of tranquility, where you have achieved the right effect. Lovely! Brilliant...

Just beautiful, your work is so sensualy pleasing. Id like to visit Thailand there is so much knowledge in those temples. I wonder which sect was the temple part of ?Nat

Nice! Makes me feel tranquil... and good imagery, btw.

This seems a very simple poem, but it paints a very pleasant, tanquil pictiure.

wow, i felt like I was there myself! veri nice!

Very nice and so full of a spiritual hope.

Heart of the Sword

very cool poem... I love the format & the imagery is excellente

I want to go to that temple! :) Very good poem! Thankyou for your review on mine, personally i think it's a bit shit but i do appreciate comments anyway! I like the way this poem hums with strength...

Keep writing!