hey there

not bad. your writing is very poetic. is this style merely the prologue or do you intend to continue this throughout? what is the intended length of this piece? by the way, what is the hook? what will set this apart from the rest of the vampire stories? is there anything special about your heroine/protagonist?

i really like the style of this story. i am intrigued and curious about your direction. do you have an outline for this story?

thanks for sharing this with me.

mr. kim

Alright, this so far seems to be an interesting story, which is good. I can't tell much though because it is a profile, but now i have a general idea for the chapters to come, which is good and want to read. Anyway, I like it. ;-)