|Reviews for Spice|
| Aimee Raven 10/15/03 . chapter 1
thats so qt! lol, i really like it, its...i cant relate to it but it just seems so sweet, lol. i love the end particularly. love and good luck. Twilight
| My Little Poet 9/26/03 . chapter 1
lol, i like how it doesn't make much sense. that's very interesting how it jumps from place to place. it's very realistic because that's how many people think. :-)
| Rebecca Kelsey 9/25/03 . chapter 1
| simpleplan13 9/25/03 . chapter 1
It makes sense to me I cna completely realte its an excellent poem & i love your rhymes cuz they're so uncommon!
| JJR Meerraf 9/25/03 . chapter 1
yep, i've been there. great stuff. I loved the line:
But I'm not there anymore
You showed me the door
ouch! that was harsh, but it hit the nail on the head. Excellent work.
P.S. I'd love to hear from you via email.
| Nerf 9/25/03 . chapter 1
I reli like this. it has a reli strong ending. Well done!
| pippin tomson 9/25/03 . chapter 1
It's good, for a poem that came off your fingertips, better than that even.