thats so qt! lol, i really like it, its...i cant relate to it but it just seems so sweet, lol. i love the end particularly. love and good luck. Twilight

lol, i like how it doesn't make much sense. that's very interesting how it jumps from place to place. it's very realistic because that's how many people think. :-)

good job!

cool

It makes sense to me I cna completely realte its an excellent poem & i love your rhymes cuz they're so uncommon!

yep, i've been there. great stuff. I loved the line:

But I'm not there anymore

You showed me the door

ouch! that was harsh, but it hit the nail on the head. Excellent work.

P.S. I'd love to hear from you via email.

Keep writing!

I reli like this. it has a reli strong ending. Well done!

XXNerfxx

It's good, for a poem that came off your fingertips, better than that even.