OOF! That one hit me right in the heart. Gorgeoous.

Interesting...in a good way...is a little bit confusing to me. Has potential if you are willing to develop it more.

Again, I love it. A scenario I can relate too. Nothing else to say, it's great.

You play around with those words beautifully, making heart out of something inclined to being cliche.

Written by Shadow's Crib (anon. poster):
"Hi!I really like the way you write it...especially the content...it kinda touched me in a way...anyway...keep writing :) im looking forward to see your stories more..." the 28th of Sept. I'm sorry for deleting this but I kinda got flooded by your comment times 14.

Hi!I really like the way you write it...especially the content...it kinda touched me in a way...anyway...keep writing :) im looking forward to see your stories more...

hrm... what he said. ;þ get over it, emogirl.. go get your philosophy boy

Absolutely beautiful.