|Reviews for Death's Bride|
| ThisCut-UpAngel 7/24/05 . chapter 1
Nicely done I must say. Beautifully haunting-much applause.
| Aslan Israel 1/29/05 . chapter 1
Very interesting thought. Great job on this.
| deletemyaccount2012 1/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I like the whole idea of the poem. Its written very well.
| i am pookie 6/22/04 . chapter 1
I love your poem! You should really consider creating a story from it! Love the whole concept of Death choicing a bride - quite original! I would pick a favorite line from your poem, but I like it all! -that's a compliment-
I just have to ask - how did you get the idea to write this poem? Did it just kind of come to you?
lots of luv,
| the insane floo pot 3/7/04 . chapter 1
Okay I wasn't sure how you could pull off an idea like this but whoah all I can think to say other than how much I love it is... STORY! Please write a story about it.. I think it'd be great, that is if you could, or still want to!
"Death becomes you mi'lady"
*smirks* Oh so delicloulsy chilling!
| Aimee Raven 3/4/04 . chapter 1
Hey! Very beautiful poem, truly. Quite powerful, full of emotion and brilliant imagery. Good job! There's a story with death I really like on here, here's the link if you're interested:
Anyway good job! Hope you write a story :D. Thnx for your review. Love, Mia
| Cherry Jones 2/5/04 . chapter 1
very cool I loved it
I hope that I get to read the story to it soon
| psychochick4life 1/24/04 . chapter 1
i think you should write a story about this! it would be really great! and by the way thanks for reviewing! the poem was really cool and the story i bet would be awesome.
| Pothe 1/24/04 . chapter 1
i love the rhym to it. great idea about death choosing a bride, haven't read many if any about that.
| Leila J. Midnight 1/24/04 . chapter 1
That was awsom! Very very good. i think this would be a great storie.
| Wren Craven 1/23/04 . chapter 1
wow...i really liked this one..i know the word 'like' is way overused, but i fully LIKE this work, thanks for reviewing mine...
| desolus 11/7/03 . chapter 1
I loved the rhymes. It was neat, well-written, with the potential to be more than just a poem if you'd written it just a bit longer. - You may guess that I wanted to write more...
A concept poem. Yay! I believe this would make an excellent story. O_o A creepy one, if you write it in a horror genre. Dude, I am _so_ looking forward to it.
| Jesi Lynna 11/6/03 . chapter 1
Very nice. I love it. You should write more!
| Anjeni Windsinger 10/11/03 . chapter 1
A great and well-written poem.
| darkblackwings 9/27/03 . chapter 1
Wow! I love it. Please make it a story, please, soon.