A thing under the bed...

Is it okay that the first line has 6 syllables?

Oh, these are great! The last lines of each rock. You could upload all of these as separate chapters...and then add some more...*wink wink nudge nudge*

~lyv

Cute little poems:). I like the last two especially. You should capitalize the first letter of every line, though.

All of these are great, and I especially liked "The thing under the bed". Please write more soon.

Hi,

I like these Haiku's very much. Please R+R my poems if u have time.

Thanks for sharing :)