That was quite good.I realy like it. In a way it was simple yet explaned a lot.

Beautiful as always -- as you are. I truly hope you don't feel this way... I might write more, but that brat of a sister of mine is sitting right here. I love you, anyway.
If you were missing me -- kinda hope you were -- I've been grounded. I want to talk to you soon, though; you always were the best one for my psychological problems.
Love forever,
Mo

as a cutter this story just amazed me. it was like all my feelings, or lack thereof, were just written out right there on the page. this moved me so much course it also made me wanna cut but hey that might be really saying something about your work. this piece seems almost perfect to me. i love it.
~fallenangel

*blinks*
Whoa.
Just. . .just whoa.
"To be inside myself, and outside myself, to feel and not feel - the pain and pleasure and apathy of cutting is the only drug I need these days."
As a cutter, I was almost brought to tears with that line- it describes why I do it so perfectly it frightens me. *looks at arm and thinks*
You have such a great way of describing things. I love stream-of-consciousness pieces- this was wonderful and going on my faves.
-Jessica

That is a wonderful story and very well described.

~*Autumn*~

In reading this, my dear, I found myself caught up in some dark, bleeding trap... it was deadly frightening. There was some stunning imagery in this (that's half my fault, everything has imagery to me), and little or no technical mistakes. You're amazing, and you're beautiful, Phae.

Get in touch with me, okay? I miss you.

that was beautiful. you described the mentality of a cutter so perfectly. i love the 'mellow feeling of tainted euphoria' line, and how you kept returning to shades of red staining white, the beauty of blood, and the satisfaction in illusory control and pain.

This was amazing. It was so vivid and descriptive - I was experiencing your emotions and feeling your pain as I read this, and it was simply wonderful. Bravo! ^^;

Breathtaking. I could see, hear, and feel every second of this piece. I was cringing in pain when the blade broke my skin, and feeling my heart jackhammer against my ribcage under pressure of the scalding water. You're amazing.

Remember, hon', I'm always here for you. And if you ever want to run away, come to the States. Just ask me for my address; my parents'll love to have you.

*Hugs.* Love you, Phae.

I originally wasn't going to review, but them I remembered how I like reviews and how annoying as hell it was when people didn't review my story.

You describe things so much better than I do. I have to practice, or just make better use of my vocabulary or something. People who write original fiction, even if it's heavily influenced by their passions [anime or manga for example] seem to be better writers overall. ::ducks away from flying debre from fanfiction writers::

It's hard to write a previously made character without making him OOC, but it's even harder to write an original character and make *them* OOC. Strange, isn't it? That's off the subject completely, but whatever. I like it. It's a good stand along piece, but I want to know more about the man she was crying over that made her loose control of herself...

This is really good. Your description is great! Why not? If ya wanna continue, continue.