hm... amazing. I have several of your works, and i am truly amazed, if these as you said, were written when you were younger, you must be truly amazing now. Your wording, is unique and exquisit. It is precise in a way that i have seen very seldom. you should rediscover the point to writing, you are amazing at it.

I like the way it's arranged... Don't see that everyday... It's... confusing somewhat.. Hold on let me read it a few more times...