You know, I think that this is my favorite story you've written, original or fan fic. Still, it's been a while, so please, update this soon, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Very Interesting Story!! I would love to read the rest of it!!

This is one of my favorite of any of your stories, and definatly my favorite of your origanal works. I just love it. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Well, it looks like the battle has taken its toll on those that would bring chaos to the streets. Time to rest and regroup for the next round.

And so the war continues. I can understand Deathwish in the fight, her desire is honorable. But Thrillkiller is NUTS! Now, let the fight truly commence!

Awesome story. I really like it.

Well, those that wanted Descent and her friends out in the open wanted a war, they are GETTING IT! And I think it will soon get to the point where some of the other players in this town will soon have to get involved. And when that happens, LOOK OUT!

Wow. I don't know how I missed this cool story before. This is going to be a fun ride! This is a great opening!

Sounds like its time to call out the troops! Time to bring in some heavy hitters to deal with these pyscho's! Because that may be the only way to stop this war on the streets!

So, the forces of darkness have their battle plan laid out. Somehow, I don't think its going to work out the way they have planned. I smell a lot of death and destruction, with the darkness forced into retreat!

Well, now we know the relationship between two of the players in this game. I just hope this ex Templer hasn't bitten off more than she can chew!

Well, they've been warned. Now, its going to be interesting to see who, if any one of them, can succeed in this contract. I seriously doubt that any of them will.

I knew that Diana was crazy, but this is NUTS! To bind a elf to her with such magic is going to cause severe repricussions when she is free. And I look forward when Diana is taken down for the count!

So, Descent has managed to make some serious allies in this fight against the Lady! I smell the final fight coming and soon! And when all is said and done, the powers of light may just be grateful for this former being of darkness who has done so much good.

I like where your going with this. Please continue.