Wow...now that was deep. Really meaningful, somewhat evil...but brillianrt! love, Mia

That's sick and twisted, hehehe. The stupid game that everyone plays at times. Great poem though, I loved the last paragraph, it was great. cruell, but great, :-).

I love this poem its completely true... but the daughter line doesnt make sense... marvelous poem tho!

Much darkness and angstyness...I like the "Trust me..." etc. really gave the piece emphasis on certain points. Thanks for sharing this...

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)