kinda confusing but I think i understand the people that love the most are the ones that can also be the most hurtful... excellent poem

That comes along really nicely. Great job. Keep writing.

Hm. Again, with the angstyness. As a poem it was decent. It's the emotions you express that really get across...what you feel. I think there's greatness in that.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)