Oh god! disturbing, deeply so, but really good! this will stick in my mind for a long time...

Clowns... *b-r-r-r-r-r*. I hate clowns. Your story did not change that fact. But it was still extremely well written. I commend you on your excellent work.

Whoa, that is so freaky. I think I might have nightmares tonight! Brilliant story.

*lime-girl*

That was creepy...

:laughing at title: Remind me of the host of my website, ihateclowns.com. Good story, impressive little one you got going here. You should make this one a little longer though.

Meh..im to lazy to sighn in.
well, i really like this piece of work.I think its probably my faveorite oone of yours. well..i jst wated o say that. OHH...nad please review mY poem ULGY MR.GREN MAN.It sounds dumb but it kinda...well...it's like my other stuff.
(Aka ASh Noon))

Nice language, but don't reveal the ending in your summary, okay?
Truly a good story! Keep it up, okay?