The 'rotten one' is the worst type of evil, unopposed and invisible seemingly to all but those he would have no wish to target. I had to read it through a few times just to be sure i got it all but it just gets better.
An instant hit with me and i can't find an error worth mentioning.
Write on.

...yeah. That was different.
I like it!
-Az

You have a way with words. That guy was really creepy... Did he make Kerianon ask her teacher for permission to go to the lavatory? Anyways, keep up the good work!