Another aspect of nature wonderfully written, she'd be proud ^_^

*sighs* It's so beautiful...creates great images in my head. Really nice work.

Wow, that's cool. Wait, you're talking about fire... oh well. It works anyway.
Well, I wouldn't have thought of that metaphor- I mean, the fire is obvious, almost cliche, but it's like you have a metaphor on top of a metaphor with the unhappiness thing. It's an original idea, and it's well written. In other words, great poem! I love it.

Lovely imagery. I really enjoyed this. Wonderful picture painted...Good work.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

I really like this piece, and whispers is better than ghosts *nods*

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