*waves hand into the air as he reads it* It flows very nicely throughout. Good rhythm to the poem. Nice.

*considers yelping*
*doesn't*
Eh...yeah. Repetitive. But somehow...egh. Rhyming trivializes things.

Very nice, deeper meanings, cool...

Oh, wow! I certainly agree with your friend. This has got to be your best rhyming poem by far, and one of your best poems overall. I'm not sure exactly what I like about it, sorry, but this is truly amazing.

this is amazing. i saved it! i can't believe you were just gonna let it die! thanx for listning to me on that.

Very nice. The title/line "Maybe in a Thousand Years" was a powerful/effective phrase. I liked the theme of this.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

the line "I'll see the world from your eyes " doesn't quite fit. Everything else is great and I love the last line.