Hello. NIce story. The character description is good. and it does sounds very intersting. I hope you don't plan on giving up on the story, because I think it is good.

Poor kid...wonder what happened to red eyes..huh. please hurry and update soon!

hey that soo cool..the last time u updated was my birthday! :D
but it was last yr!! c'mon UPDATE! i like this story. one of the few that interested me! please update! it soo vivid and i felt like i was actually there.
either update or publish your story so at least i can buy it!

Good story. I like how its started out. Now if you'd just update...

i have one question. is it the same plot? i don't understand why you thought this story was rubbish. it really isn't! it's on my favorites list. anywho, update soon.

YAY! This story rules. I love vamp fics. Please, please PLEASE update soon!!
~Ave
PS: I love that name, Neena.

wohoo u updated! I'm glad, this was a really great chappie it was hilarious. Can't wait for chappie 9, update soon plz! I can't wait to find out more about this party and this relationship between Neena and Blood, they're so funny when they are together :)

geeze...took you long enough...now, about the next chapter...
upload soon!
-strawberry

You must writing faster! Lol. I think things need to get a little more...romantic betwee Blood and Neena.

this story is one of the best. update soon!

haha...i was cracking up when i was reading your story...and my grandparents looked at me strangely...
great chapter-good luck on pulling those grades up =)
and update soon!

Great chapter! Blood needs to just kiss her sometime! Lol.

BWAHAHAHAH! I loved that! Blood is so funny! I like joe too! They all rock. I imagined Val as this funny looking white-haired gay guy. Very strange...

So far, I have enjoyed each chapter and am eager for the next. I think your characters are well described and interesting and congratulations on making a character under the age of 10 that isn't annoying. Good luck with your grades!

lol i remember joe singing that. I just assumed that he was little and didn't know better. I'm so glad you updated i thought it was cute about the Blood and Neena situation. Gotta love the ending haha and Val is a very interesting chappie, update soon!