well, i have decided to review a few of your OF's. i really like this, i have insane trouble writing this type of poetry. i love the last line avery much. i enjoyed how you clearly showed human nature, and then made your dream seem so far off by saying you want to be alone but you don't want to be lonely. very true to life, very sad. good work.

Great poem. I feel the same way. It was great.

O_o Are you me? You must be me...We think the same..

wow. You just described me. to a big texas T. and my school. They block the halls...and give you dirty looks when you say excuse me and try and get through...

Laura
"I find it kinda funny, I find it kinda sad, the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had."

I often feel the same way in my high school. There are way too many people pushing their way through the halls without giving a single thought to whatever's on their mind alone. Staring off into space, hugging, fighting, shoving...UGH. Very good poem.

Awesome ending. I think you're too easy on yourself. I mean, this is the kind of poem that you have to keep short... but it's not developed to it's full potential. This is really, no **, a poem that'd be really great to see fully developed. Great job, though. i know the suffocation thing.