i got scared when i read teh first stanza because of this massive word which i had no idea the meaning of...but after that i was ok, my vocab skills kicked in *thank god*
your vocab is truly impressive.
anyway, this was a wonderful poem...i think it truly came home for me though in the last stanza, it was just amazing, so breath taking and the feeling it have off was such pure and simple isolation and it was chilling...something so cold in its implications, i loved it...
"You left me forgotten so very well
Teach me how to forget you like that..."
god so simple, but it spoke so beautiful, echoing volumes.
great work, kudos.

wow. this is truley amazing

Ah, this is great...the vocab alone makes me want to hug you. Unforunately, I really ought to be doing an ap us paper, so...perhaps I'll leave more on this later. Great job!

~beth

nicely written!

Wow.. I was just stopping by I saw one of your reviews and decided to check out your page. This is a GREAT poem your style is fabulous.

I tried to review this more then once now I'll try it this way...I like your depth you have created in this piece...Excellent job! Thanks for your kind reviews...

Wow, I love your stuff so much. You are a genius. ^_^ Great poem, I can relate somewhat, because I have inherited the ability to become invisible when I'm with people. They just forget about me and ignore me, so obviously, I've written simliar poems. Great job though, I love it! Keep up the greatness!

Very moving with so much emotion. This was a joy to read.


~Heart of the Sword

Sad, very very sad, but also very very good. And to think, you mostly write on what you feel or what you've felt...