Sounds like a prayer. I liked it.

Heart of the Sword

Hi, This poem is great and thank you for reading mine. God Bless,

Meletyohar

I LOVE THIS! It is incredible. Simply gorgeous. You rock.

write on!

What I really like about this poem is simply it's yearning... your yearning for God. Pure, honest and true

Jess 33:3

heard it before

this poem is a calling to god, asking for him to come to you. asking him to purify you. why are you impure now? "tell me of your teaching" "enable me to live for you"

are you asking god to join you again?

is your faith waning?

is losing your faith such a bad thing?

i know this wasn't really a review, but it's an interesting thought