you have to continue... this is no question.
i see you've changed pennames too cool.^^
btw... i think the only problem i have is with the title... seems a little too simple. ^^ but simple can be good at times. ^^
well, those are just my thoughts...
more to come in chapter one hopefully... looking forward to the post.^^!!

oo! I like the way you set this up, write more please! (sounds angsty already ^^*)